Kane, Peter, Khouri and Michael
Feedback
1-Reconsidering the title -Yin and Yang.
Ying and Yang is too general and broad.
It would be more powerful if the title can suggest the girl and the lake.
2-The background music
- Kane suggested that girl should have her special sound when she is about to appear. We hear it first before we see the girl appear. (Ex. the first shot that the girl appears)
- The part of music when the girl and the boy are sitting on the ground (more serious?)
3-Sound Effect
The girl's sound is very important, especially when she is turning into the monster. (sound of dark power)
4-The background and the depth of the lake
Chair mentioned about the background when the boy and the girl are under the water.
5- Animation mistake
- On the first shot back ground are moving in different speed.
- hospital scene- grid floor
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